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CarterArch

NAME: Carter Arch

Gender: Male

Parents Faction: Abnegation

Desired Faction: Erudite

Least Desired Faction: Dauntless

Current Age: 17

Appearance: Blackish brown hair with grayish-cyan eyes. Is about 6'01'" in inches? He is usually seen with a blue jacket  and some jeans. Has a jellyfish shaped necklace he got from his mom on his fourteenth birthday. Has a great body :) He lis a light chocolate color. He weighs about 160. He has a pair of sport blue shoes that he is usually seen wearing.

Personality: He is really kind, but if you get on his bad side, then you're in a pretty bad situation. He likes to help people. His father, Hail, died a while back, and he's still a little sore about it. Is an incredible swimmer, And used to go off looking for people in need, although his mother often has to wander around to find him. :)

History: Biography

Early life: When I was a small child (1-9)I acted like an abnegation, and always served and helped others, just as my parents did.I had an older brother named Ryder who was going to chose Abnegation in 3 years(I was six). When I was seven I starting realizing, that I might be as much of an Abnegation as I thought. I did love helping others rather than myself, but my life force was driven by a thirst for knowledge. When I was 10 My twin sister Kore confided to me she was going to choose Amity, and she told our parents Fabian, and Rose Arch. surprisingly they accepted, and said our mom was from Amity, and our father was from Erudite. They also said my moms original name was Rose Swords. From that day I was relieved, but not quite ready to tell them I want to be Erudite.

At age 11 I'd somehow made them wonder if I was an Erudite more than an abnegation. My mom asked and he said yes he was thinking about being a Erudite. I was scared they would dissaprove, but my father "encouraged it, as if his two 'young-ins" didn't just tell him they were going to leave eventually.From then to age 15 I never stopped helping people. When I was fourteen my father taught me how to identify people in need which took almost a year. When I  was 15, a week after MY birthday My father died. It was a sad time for me, and I never fully regained my happy personality.

At age 16, I started getting serous about helping people, because my father loved it. I actually did not enjoy so much non intellectual time, but it kept my mind straight, which was an important thing to me. My fathers death made Ryder become the male figure at age 24. The following year my choosing ceremony cam upon, I chose...

Weapons: A blue slate sword. Some silvers arrows, with a leather quiver.

Comments

OK, so I see some minor issues:

  • Will he be named hunter Arch or Adorns? If it is Archs, please either change the page Title, or if you don't know how to, I can do it :)
  • He weights 10 lbs?
  • Uh-mm, he could be American, Parisian, Australian, African, but do keep in mind that he wouldn't almost look nothing like that, since the people only live in Chicago so although he can be chocolate-skinned, he can't look like all those nationalities. Hope I made my point :/
  • Please add his least desired faction. Just write any faction really...
  • Have you made his Word Bubble yet?

"If life hands you a lemon, throw it at someone!" DrXax Resize

This looks good to me have you made your word bubble yet so we can do your test?

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Just to point it out, the Abnegation don't go hunting or fishing, as they would consider it selfish for killing the animals just to get food.

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  • Like Malik had said, fishing and hunting would be considered as selfish as you are killing animals for the sake of having food.
  • Despite Carter wanting to transfer the Erudite faction, while he's in abnegation it's doubtful that his parents would allow him to read books. Reading books would be self-indulgent, putting your own need for knowledge in front of other people. In the Abnegation' s eye, Carter could easily be helping out in the community instead of reading for his own needs.
  • Carter will very rarely (and is very discouraged by the faction) be able go and swim, as Abnegation's generally do not partake in activity that's related to self-enjoyment, whether it'd be "take to the waves, swimming or by boat".
  • Gotcha covered partner.

|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|——~Kevin——GrieverEven if you end up as the world's enemy, I'll be your knight.Griever

  • Like Kevin previously stated, it is highly doubtful that Carter's parents would allow him to read books, as it would be self-indulgent, when he could be spending that time helping others. You MUST change that.

Other than that, it looks good to begin the test.

  1. REDIRECT User:JayeTheMofo/sigcoding

Please, do change the thing about the books. Although I understand his parents did encourage him even to change faction, while he i still in Abnegation, he would need to help people, encouraging parents or not.

"If life hands you a lemon, throw it at someone!" DrXax Resize

Every one of the three previous comments states that even if Carter wants to transfer to Erudite, it is highly doubtful that he will be able to read books while he is in Abnegation. To the Abnegation's eye, that is self-indulgent for an Abnegation to partake in activities that are related to self enjoyment. In the faction he will be helping others whenever he can instead of fulfilling his own need for enjoyment. This must be changed if you wish for the test to begin.

|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|——~Kevin——GrieverEven if you end up as the world's enemy, I'll be your knight.Griever

Aptitude Test

Game Master
Send Me an Owl! - Your test is in the process of turning conclusive.
A young looking Amity man welcomes Carter to the aptitude testing room with a bright smile on his face that can brighten up anyone's day. "Would you kindly take a seat here?" The man says, pointing towards the dentist chair looking chair in the center of the room as makes the final preparing for Carter's aptitude test.



Game Master
Send Me an Owl! - Your test is in the process of turning conclusive.
"Let's begin then, shall we?" The Amity man says as he hands Carter a vial of liquid, "Drink this please. I insist that this is not harmful to your body in any way." The man has an assuring look on his face that can confirm that what he had just said is truthful.



Game Master
Send Me an Owl! - Your test is in the process of turning conclusive.
Carter would wake up to find himself in the same room he was in except it was almost empty this time. Looking around, Carter would have found two tables nearby, one with a slab of meat while the other with a knife. After a short silence, a voice (that was not the Amity man's) commands, "Choose!"



Game Master
Send Me an Owl! - Your test is in the process of turning conclusive.
The slab of meat disappears, as low growling can be hear along with a few snarles. Suddenly cries of distress echoes through the room. From a far is Carter's twin sister Kore is being forced towards a corner. The wolf snarls before proceeding to maim Kore brutally and relentlessly. Large quantities of blood flow from Kore's wound onto the floor, creating a pool of red blood. "Help... me... Carter...." Kore says weakly.



Game Master
Send Me an Owl! - Your test is in the process of turning conclusive.
The banging of the knife had a "use" but not an efficient or one that Carter had thought. The banging of the knife was not loud enough to startle the wolf, let alone scare it but it did attract the wolf's attention to Carter instead of Kore. The wolf swiftly pounces towards Carter with it's sharp teeth snarling ready to bite through Carter's flesh, because of Carter having interrupted the wolf's slaying of its prey.



Game Master
Send Me an Owl! - 23:53, October 9, 2014 (UTC)
The wolf growls out in pain, as the knife goes through it's right shoulder blade and part of his neck. The wolf, which is in pain, attempts to lunge at Carter once again, determined to finish his meal.



Game Master
Send Me an Owl! - Your test is in the process of turning conclusive.
The clumsy stumble causes the wolf to claw Carter's side, creating a gash onto his hip. The wolf's pounce misses however because of Carter's sudden stumble to the side. The wolf now vulnerable to a counterattack, the stab lands the finishing blow onto the already injured wolf, as the knife slits through the wolf's neck. The scene changes as Carter is now on an almost empty bus aside from the bus driver and a male passenger. The man slightly puts down the newspaper, turning to Carter, revealing his burned face. He turns the the front page of the newspaper towards Carter, showing him the picture of a man. He asks, "Please tell me, do you know this man? Tell the truth, this will surely help me!" After seeing the picture, Carter "does" know of who the man in the picture is, but whether or not he tells the truth is up to him.



Game Master
Send Me an Owl! - Your test is in the process of turning conclusive.
"Are you absolutely positive? This is crucial for me... I beg you, I need to know... This isn't for anything harmful, I promise!" The man urges to Carter, trying to convince him to perhaps tell the truth he is hoping for. The man has a rather disappointed and slightly angry look on his face.



Game Master
Send Me an Owl! - Your test is in the process of turning conclusive.
The man sighs as he takes his newspaper with him and gets off the bus in the next bus stop. Before the bus leaves the stop, the man looks towards Carter with a glare. The simulation ends as the Amity men look towards Carter with a smile of his face, "You received Erudite; I can tell that you will serve well in whichever faction you do decide to choose. Best of luck in the future!"


Your Results are Conclusive

Updated Divergent Universe Conclusive

The test concluded that you shall be a member of Erudite. But that's not the end of it! You now need to make a page for your character. When you finish that, add your Character's name in its faction and then role play with the character that you just made.


|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|——~Kevin——GrieverEven if you end up as the world's enemy, I'll be your knight.Griever


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